December 14, 2010 a poem: because i’m thinking about how i’d like to paint tazewell
[ from a. addair who is listening to Roger Whittaker (Christmas Collection) ]
Tazewell, Virginia
sunset happens hours before its due
the other side of the mountain basks
while the valley cools
my aunt sits on her rotting porch
freshly painted semi-gloss white
in a too-late attempt to save it
she lights up a joint and nods
to the blue ridge
and exhales red clay and coal dust
Tags: appalachia, blue ridge, christmas collection, coal dust, demolition, fall, family, joint, poetry, roger whittaker, springfield, Tazewell, top of the hill, trees, virgina, virginia
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Permalink # Douglas said
Beautiful/honest imagery. I think you might need to write more of the short gems.
The part about the joint makes me laugh. It fits perfectly in the side pocket of the rest of the poem which seems to be a fleeting and almost hopeless, yet truthful and familiar.
Permalink # Levon Walker said
“fits perfectly in the side pocket of the poem” excellent. a poem itself.